HMD || Crit

[hatedbyfanboys]

Something seem off about my characterizations? General questions about Raiden's actions or thoughts? Then post your concerns/critiques here. Anonymous posting is allowed, IPs are off, and comments are screened. Please don't flame/bash. The more you explain things to me, the better I'll understand - and any help/advice is greatly appreciated.

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[colonelcrotchgrab]

why are you not raikov.

[hatedbyfanboys]

Because I'm not.